I Once
Had A Chill
One September Night.
Granny’s Poultice Rub Took the
Wheezing Away,Though It Was Still an
Eighty Degree Dog Night, With Crops Still In
The Barn. I Needed Rest, But Pa Forewarns. Bank’s
Taking The Farm, If Something Isn’t Soon done… Get Up
He Said! Let’s Take Out This Barn. I Said I Would If I could,
But The Heat Hurts My Head. He Said if Sherman’s Army
Gets Here, We May All Wind Up DEAD ! So I Pulled
Myself Upward, Staggering, I Fell Out Of The Bed.
I Pulled All The Tobacco Out Of the Barn By
Sunup, And Rested Beneath The Old
Appletree. Sherman’s Army Took
Another Path, And When Pa
Came Looking The Only
Things Found Dieing
Were The Tree,
And Me joyceinumass
Paul Willis-2011 GlorymomGeneralSherman
that was really good enjoyed reading it xxjen
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Thank You Jenny,
I’ll have to come and visit your site too.
I’ve seen you around some, Prens, and
the Hook…Bless You
paul
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Nicely done, Paul. it sounds remarkably of the time! :-)
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Lovely words shaped in talent and creativeness … Thanks for visiting me!
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Thank You for such wonderful poetry. And for the follow back of course. I’ll certainly be visiting regularly.
God Bless You
paul
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A very good piece of writing, Paul xxx
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Thanks Cindy, great to see you.
God Bless You
paul
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I popped over from Cindy’s Paul, and look what I found. A compelling write.
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Well, I’m happy you did, and thank you for the compliment, and for stopping by to read it.
God Bless You
paul
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Paul, i just posted, you will love this one :)
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This is magnificent Paul! I like the visual form and the content is dark satire, for which I have a special affection.
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All I know is something, or someone had something to say.
God Bless You
paul
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Love this too, Paul – such a creative layout and evocative apple tree image. I was caught simultaneously between the morbid and humorous options at the end, so was interested to read these other interpretations, as well as your intention. Either way, full credit to your natural abundance of wit :-D
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Thank you,
Actually, I didn’t intend humor…for once.
Maybe I should start trying to be funny when
I’m serious and vice versa?
But, Tammy who commented earlier
said there was a known story in her
family, I’m interested in hearing more.
Thanks for dropping by.
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It’s a story known in my own family – love the apple tree photo.
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A real story?
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Well done !!!!! I really liked this. How often do you post ? I shall check back again to read more.
PeterLS
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I try to stay current day to day, but, usually a post a week anyway. I used to post every day, but let it go for a while when I started spending too much time on another site; you know where. I am really tired of that place now that it has gone with the new set-up. God Bless You Peter, I’ll be visiting, and sending your post out to Twitter, and facebook etc. Did you have a “Share” button? I didn’t see one.
paul
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Soooo glad to see you back ‘writing’ again Paul! I loved this one – the wonderful atmosphere… great touch of humour at the end! Bless you! You’re a great writer – believe that!
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Thank you, except…it wasn’t supposed to be funny…heh
Hope you are feeling better tonight,
paul
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Oops, sorry, then I must be feeling better, haha!
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Oops, sorry, then I must be feeling better, haha!
Okay, I deleted it…but thanks, cause I thought it was something just in my connection or something, as I just had to go in and approve one of my OWN comment replies.
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Thanks Denise, I re-read it, and can see how it can have dual applications, I guess it’s all for the reader anyway.
God Bless You
paul
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What a great blog you have. The recipes are excellent and this poem, well it’s outstanding. You have captured such an authentic voice. I like the inclusion of the tree at the end. It is very effective. Very well done!
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Thank You So Much…most seem to feel it a little morbid even, but, “Captured an authentic voice” as you said, I think that’s exactly what took place…some sort of muse, or maybe even a voice from back then just breezed through me. Thank You for dropping by, God Bless You
paul
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I like it paul, very good. You and i will be poets someday. I also like the way you set it out, i think i may try my next one like that, Harry
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Anything but on your head like the last one…you had me reading upside down…hehe just kidding, it was a lot of fun.
Hope to see you around more, thanks for stopping by.
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Very cool And creative piece! Well done.
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wow.
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