Possibly My Most Well Written Post/Poem Ever… WHITE NOISE 0.000000 0.000000 Send it >TwitterFacebookEmailRedditPrintLinkedInTumblrPinterestPocketMoreFacebookLike this:Like Loading... 19 Comments I promises to revisit this poem! ;-) LikeLike —Puuuuuuuuurfect. —- x LikeLike I liked it! Very deep! LikeLike Seriosly, have you ever noticed how LOUD the white noise can sound in the dead of night? God bless you, Paul. LikeLike nice. ;) LikeLike So i was one who spotted the N missing, :lol: now that was an easy post to make :) LikeLike No, actually, you and Prenin pointed out that the “N” was missing, but this was no easy post.. had to think long and hard on it…still thinking in fact. Bless You paul LikeLike What a tickle! ;-) You are too clever .. LikeLike The sound of the vacuum cleaner on a hospital ward after a long sleepless night Your space reminded me of that. All the best, Joanna LikeLike This is one I plan to revisit over and over. It is completely consistent and without flaws. Always impressed when there are no grammar errors, no weak lines, nothing calling attention to itself and detracting from the whole experience. There is absolutely nothing anyone could do to improve this. It is just right the way it is. Honestly, I plan to memorize the entire text and quote to people when I think appropriate. LikeLike My favorite kind of poetry: spare, understated, minimalist. You must teach me your technique! I wish you enough. . . Paula LikeLike I Knew you were going to do that!! I just knew it! c LikeLike I told ya we attended different schools together… LikeLike Paul, had you a late night when you posted this, i see NO post LikeLike Hi Paul, I’m sorry but I can’t see the poem, or is it some kind of wordplay that being and outsider can’t get? :) Have a nice weekend! LikeLike No, you’re not an outsider.. but, yes it was sort of a joke, as some of my blogging buddies were ribbing on me for leaving the letter “N’ out of the word “Open” in my last poem though…It was purposely left out.. as “Ope” is a poetic anachronism, and has been used for centuries.. So, I just thought I would see if they noticed… the Post Was missing… just making sure everyone is reading before commenting.. LOL, just kidding..thanks for stopping by, and I love your site. God Bless You paul LikeLike Quiet time! LikeLike hahahaha! LikeLike Hi Paul! :) Sounds like a rough night my friend! :( I have worked as a waiter in my younger days and we had nobody on the door one night, so about 10% of the customers sneaked out without paying! :( Glad I don’t have your job! LoL!!! Found Psalm 53 and it’s a big negative! :) 1 The fool hath said in his heart, There is no God. Corrupt are they, and have done abominable iniquity: there is none that doeth good. 2 God looked down from heaven upon the children of men, to see if there were any that did understand, that did seek God. 3 Every one of them is gone back: they are altogether become filthy; there is none that doeth good, no, not one. Rom. 3.10-12 4 Have the workers of iniquity no knowledge? who eat up my people as they eat bread: they have not called upon God. 5 There were they in great fear, where no fear was: for God hath scattered the bones of him that encampeth against thee: thou hast put them to shame, because God hath despised them. 6 Oh that the salvation of Israel were come out of Zion! When God bringeth back the captivity of his people, Jacob shall rejoice, and Israel shall be glad. Sounds like the 13 years of crap I had – the Press and Media are lower than a snakes belly when they have a vulnerable victim and own all around them. Still: I have a CRB certificate which proves my pristine criminal record and that’s absolute proof if any were needed… :) God Bless my friend and get some rest!!! LoL!!! Prenin. LikeLike Please let us know you were here- like, or leave a comment. It only takes a second. Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (Address never made public) Name Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.