You Saw it coming, I Saw it go…
I was younger then. Foreknew what I Saw, but in verity, still don’t know.
Before you Saw it coming, I’d begun to See a light.
For the Sake of all concerned, you Sacrificed the happiness of one.
I never Saw it coming…barely even knew I was there.
A child, just learning what happiness might be, gifted ponies taken by three, and painted carrousel figures never making their rounds.
You Saw them coming…long after I Saw them go.
MARCH 14. . .MARCH 14??? Where, oh where have you been, Paul? I’ve missed your sane comments and posts and the insane ones too. I’m just checking in to ask after you, and to tell you you are missed. I thought for sure you would have a great Easter post – as that is the most important date. . .ever!! I hope you had a joyous one. I also hope and pray that you are well. Please be assured that you are daily included in my prayers, as are all my blog friends.
I hope to read something new from you soon. Take care. As ever, I wish you enough. . .
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Very good – especially combined with the visuals.
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Quite an interesting post. I’ve never read anything like this before. I really appreciate the creativity.
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Hi Paul, haven’t seen you around. Trust you are keeping well!
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Paul where are youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu?????????????????????
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Hey Sonsofthunder. Consider yourself tagged! If you want to play that game, please follow my link: http://cassiemeetsworld.com/photography/i-got-tagged-twice/
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Lovely, Paul. Bless you and yours. ♥
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Easter is a time of rememberance, a time of thankfulness, a time of Joy…
Many Blessings Paul to you and your Loved ones.
Christaian Love – Ron and Anne
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So you have it already!
I dun’t kare!
I Love your writing and your demeanor ♥ And therefore, have nominated you for the (though you have it already) Versatile Blogger Award!
God Love Ya!!! ♥
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Nice poem. It flows beautifully!
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Very lovely, Paul. Hope you have a fabulous weekend! That photo is tripping me out haha!
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I came over to see what you had up for “Unusual” this week. But then I thought, “Wow, he could use this picture (carousel) by itself for the “Unusual” theme! Why not label it as that and post your link on the “Weekly Challenge” page? Bring in more people to see it.
Well, there you go; somebody telling you what to do again >!?!<
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So lovely….a sweet gift for a Sunday. :)
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Foresight: not one of my strong points…love this one, Paul.
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Coming, going – I really liked the animated image with it. Very clever, you are Paul :)
I like the way you put your words together – a great piece.
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Nice one! You saw it coming, I saw them go… Interesting concept!
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Beautiful poetry! Congratulations on the awards!
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i like your blog enough to nominate you for the 7×7 Award you can find details at my site..
http://cobbies69.wordpress.com/2012/03/16/7×7-link-award/ or follow ruth bailey artist I received it from also.. Please enjoy…
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Great job selecting a visual to match your post. It’s perfect.
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Paul; I really liked this post.. It somehow caused a flash of my childhood before me as I read it… Blessings .. Bro Pat.
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Paul we both got an award :)
http://musingbymoonlight.com/2012/03/14/transient/
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Thanks for the heads up on the award from Jamie, and thanks for the comments.
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Thank you for this lovely post and congratulations on your award, Paul.
Many blessings,
Jamie
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You let a dried up old Irish tater beat you over to tell me you gave me an award? Don’t feel too bad…he runs circles around me across the web too…I think he’s taking too much Geritol..☺
Thank You Jamie… I will sit and write out an acceptance post, and pay the award forward as soon as possible…
Thanks Again.
paul
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Very nice Paul also John.
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Nice… nice…
Thanks for sharing :)
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Thank you Doc…
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Thank you, Paul, for the grip of this one on me today. God bless you as you go with Him!
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Thanks Deb, God Bless You as well…
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Bless you for sharing.
:-) Mandy
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you’re very welcome
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Wow, you couldn’t have chosen a better picture to represent this piece!!! Did you do the animation?
Also want to tell you that I planned to spend some time today listening to your songs. But my sound went out completely on my computer. So far I’ve tried everything I can think of — and everything suggested by a friend who’s very knowledgeable in the field. Nothing’s helped. So it looks as though I’m going to have to call in an expensive technician. And since this month has already proven to be a very costly month, it may be next month before I will be in a position to give that technician all the money he will expect to get. I feel bad about not hearing your music, but I will definitely do so when my audio returns.
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lol, well, I’m in the same situation computer wise, only worse, I don’t have the disc space left to afford sound, or imaging, as far as from my camera. You aren’t missing a lot music wise…not with the poor quality recording I did online..but, you can read some of my lyrics if you like under “Treble Clefs” at top on my static page nav selection.
No, I didn’t do the coding. Just copy and paste.
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I saw it coming!! lovely post well done and thanks…
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Thank You
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Thank you for sharing this. Love the animation.
BE ENCOURAGED! BE BLESSED!
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Thank You
God Bless You too…
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Hi Paul! :)
Thanks for the visit and comments my friend.
Hope things get better really soon – If God brought you to it he’ll see you through it! :)
God Bless my friend and be well! :)
Prenin.
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Same to you Pren.., and thanks again.
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Thank you Paul you are a man of many reflections but the one that shines the brightest is your Love for The Lord.
Christian Love Anne.
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Thank You…Hope we can chat tomorrow night…our time zones are so far apart…I have to head out now…Bless You
paul
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Beautiful , thank you.
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Thank You…
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